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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
Hello again! Here's your prize review number three! :)

Ah, graduation. Brings back fond memories, it does! I thought it was rather appropriate that Lily spoke of beginnings when really, all of their lives would soon be ending, if not in the physical sense, in the mental/emotional sense. Good foreshadowing!

I found the moment when Marlene realized her feelings for Sirius just a little confusing. Could there possibly be a story behind that realization that will come into play later? I would like to see how she came to her conclusion of fancying him after so many years. And possibly his feelings, and if he feels something for her, the explanation behind his relationship with Dorcas. It's always fun to see how relationships came about!

Mary and Peter are being mysterious! Are they together, or is Peter off spying for Voldemort? Is Mary also a turncoat, or does she have a legitimate reason for being absent?

This will be a very cool story, I know it! Keep writing! :)

~UnluckyStar57

Author's Response: I'm happy that you like this! I'm really proud of this one (especially because it says that there are no similar stories!!). I took out the part about Marlene realizing her feelings for Sirius, because I felt it wasn't placed correctly. Your review really helped me get out of this rut!

Thanks so much :)


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