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Review:sharzamow says:
I'm really enjoying this fic - I'm usually not so hot on reading second-person perspective but you carry it off really well. I'm loving the characterizations of all the Potter-Weasley clan - particularly James, Dominique and Louis. Molly's an interesting character, too - it's so easy to get carried away with next-gen characters, I think, so easy to make them all super-duper cheerful and bright and brilliant, so it's nice to come across a different type of character. James is absolutely perfect and almost exactly as I imagine him, and Dominique is brilliant, too, and very likable indeed.

This is all written really beautifully, and it flows so naturally, and I'm interested in the vast majority of the characters and where they're going. I really liked Madam Dagnell, as well - she's really well characterized and strong in the little bit she's in, and very funny. Overall, pretty much everything in this fic is strong, and cleverly written, and it's very...confident? Is that the right term, or does it make me sound like a plonker? Either way, it comes across as confident to me! Also, I love when people write about Molly - I think Percy's kids are sorely overlooked on occasion and I like them getting a good amount of attention!

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