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Review:AlexFan says:
Oh snap, just oh snap. That was my only thought throughout this. At first I was confused because I thought that Rose wasn't in the chapter but I didn't question it and just went along with it to see where the story was going.

Honestly, I should've seen the fact that Rose was dressed up as Louis coming, I really should've. How else was she going to show up to the duel?

But going by the description. it doesn't sound like Rose has the gracefulness or agility to be a dueler but she can definitely hold her own if the outcome is anything to go by.

She sounded fierce though with the description that you used and I was silently cheering for her to win.

The ending though was pure brilliance, I almost got up and started clapping when I got to the end of the chapter. Scorpius's reaction though was a surprise as well.

I hadn't expected him to react in such a way, I was expecting something more overdone or childish with him or at the very least cold but this was a lot different than I expected. But the way that he admitted that he would never duel a worthier opponent put a smile on my face and made my ship Rose/Scorpius even more than I do.

Author's Response: Yay, the mean author that I am, I'm pleased that the narrative trick caught you. :P Rose of course has to be there, but the question is how? And she's really not graceful at all - it's also the reason why she's so bad at dancing. She knows the spells very well from her father, but it's the technique that still needs work.

It's fantastic to hear that you enjoyed the end of the chapter so much! Scorpius could definitely have played poor sport and either insulted her or just walked off the field without saying a word. But he respects her, both for her duelling and for the risk she took - she's got guts, and he likes that. ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing! It means so much to hear from you!


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