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Review:AlexFan says:
My impression of Albus is a little bit mixed. I'm getting the idea that he's quite a handsome lad but his taste in clothes is questionable and that Lily thinks he's a bit dim.

I love the family dynamic going on here. The way that they speak to each other and treat each other screams family. Everyone is proper but at the same time they're affectionate.

Rose is becoming my favourite person really fast it appears. I love how much she hates the dress that she's wearing.

But anyway, lovely chapter!

Author's Response: Re: Albus. Yes, yes, and yes. He is good-looking, but with the exaggerated fashion sense of the dandy. Lily certainly assumes that he's not very smart, and she reads him primarily based on his outward appearance and actions. She is pretty harsh on him, though... just as she's harsh with everyone. :P

I'm glad to hear that you like the family dynamic! It's always the challenge of writing 1) so many related characters and 2) the next generation era. It's overwhelming to write large families, and it's great that it's working here.

Thank you again for reading and reviewing! ^_^

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