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Review:APerkins says:
Hmmm now I am wondering whether it mattered where they throw the sword in this story.
anyway. I was pleased to see Northway taking part in the action. And the good guys having some victories. I kinda liked having Harry hanging there, helplessly waiting for tennant. I kinda liked seeing the really really nasty side of tennant too before he died ( I know Im doing it again. Reviewing the wrong chapter in the wrong review box. Keep life interesting.)
I think you do action scenes quite well. the whole thing is great. Im runnign out of flattering words.
Just really enjoyed it.

Author's Response: Hi, there!

Throwing the sword away was definitely a short-term strategy, but Tenabra doesn't know that yet. Shhh!

Something kind of big happened for Dennis in this chapter. He finally got angry. Not angry for a bad reason, but angry about the bad things he sees happening around him and angry at the bad people who are making them happen. Throughout the story, Dennis has been a sort of metaphor for the rest of wizarding society. Just as he's waking up to the need to take more responsibility for the world he lives in, so is the rest of society getting tired of the Blood Order and the Minister's attempts to appease them.

Tennant isn't actually dead. Just stunned. Aggressively.

I'm glad you like the action scenes. They're always my favorites to write!

Thanks!
-Dan


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