Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:milominderbinder says:
Hiya! Here from review tag again, though I have to say I was really excited to read more of this anyway :D

Fist, I just have to say I love the chapter images, Easterlies is a graphics genius :P

I really love this story. I love that it is a much darker take on Rose's story than pretty much anything I've seen before, but not in a needlessly dark way, in an interesting, intriguing, multifaceted kind of way. I like darker, angstier fics but it's rare to find any that have this level of depth and seem like there's more behind the dark themes than meets the eye. So that is amazing to read and well done.

Your writing is amazing. I didn't notice many technical mistakes, a blessing in the fanfiction world, and I absolutely adore your descriptions and the way you show Rose's life. Some of my favourite lines from this chapter were:

It was raw and unprecedented ambition, egging them to achieve and compete with each other, to see who could master the hardest charm, the most complex potions.

Nothing was off-limits.

and

In all the rubble and chaos and disorder, precisely what was he trying to preserve?


Listing seems to work really well in your writing, haha.

Well, overall, I just loved this. I shall definitely be reading on! Well done :D

~Maia

Author's Response: Ahhh This reply is wayyy over due. So sorry! RL has been crazy lately.

Agreed, easterlies is a graphic genius :)

Glad you're enjoying the story and that it's piqued your interest. the firs couple of chapter are pretty mild (in comparison) and exposition filled, but later on is where the real adventure begins :)

Those were some of my favorite lines to write :) Glad you liked them. I do list a lot don't I haha

Thanks for stopping by! Glad you're enjoying and sorry this reply took so long.


Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 114
Submit Report: