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Review:APerkins says:
Oh yay! Action action action !
You just made one reader very very happy! Lol . Im in the middle of exam study and really should not be procrastinating. I haven't reviewed the last chapters yet and I've been meaning to as soon as exams finished but im going to go all out of order and say how awesome and exciting this chapter was first!

As always the imagination you use in creating the world is amazing. Pure blood families just casually using unforgivable curses - there is no way the weasley s would be acting like that at home and yet for this family it seems totally normal!

And 2 a side quiddich. Yay. Thankyou for making Nathan likeable. It will be so great to have a complex bad guy who is a part of the family and see where you go with that.
I really really feel for mandy! The death eaters are stirribg. Uh oh.
I hope they get her leg back on . Are her family on I wonder? I can't help remember ibg ruin only lost a chunk of his arm and was in pain etc for ages. He kept bleeding or something. So I kept picturing mandy bleeding out. But then I remember the apparition apparition lessons and someone lost a leg there and there was no blood, so I'll stop worrying about mandy passibg out from blood loss!

I'm kinda glad melds family didn't finish her off when she appeared in their Loungeroom.
Knight bus .. what an awesome ambulance!

I feel sorry for Mel.
Sirius when kicked out at least had the potter family.

Mel and mandy are. . Well. . Alone!

Oh no!
Promise I'll get to the other chapters next week I have been so bad I am really behind.
Thankyou so much for putting in awesome action intensity and drama.

I like conflict lol. It's what makes a story :)

Author's Response: Haha, I thought you might like this one with all the action :p

Aw, it means so much to me that you think my way of writing the wizarding world is imaginative. That's one of the best compliments ever!

I'm really glad you like Nathan! Aside from a few obvious faults, he is a decent person. But yes that does make things complicated!

Mandy did get her leg reattached properly at the very end of the chapter, although she's still in shock. And alone, as you pointed out. Things are not good for either of them at the moment :(

You are very right about conflict (...something I hadn't quite figured out in the early stages of writing this story, lol.) Thanks so much for your wonderful review! And good luck with your exams! :)


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