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Review:SkyEcho says:
I really loved seeing how sweet Harry and Ginny are together. It was nice to see how much he cares for her. It works to create a type of internal conflict for the reader - wanting Ginny to just tell Harry everything, but also understanding that she's dealing with things the way she knows how.
Excellent job with the water scene.

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! I realized I hadn't taken a lot of time to show the actual state of their marriage so far in the story and I wanted to show that he would be there for her if she would just open up to him about her troubles. Like you said, I think a lot of readers are conflicted about wanting Ginny to open up but not wanting her to feel wrong about holding things in. I've experienced those emotions while writing her as well.

I'm pleased to hear that the water scene worked well, too. It was a cool opportunity imagery-wise and I had hoped that it would come across as being sufficiently scary.

Thanks for another awesome review! I need to write chapter five, but I'm hoping to have it up on schedule this coming Sunday.

-Amanda


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