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Review:adluvshp says:
Hey! Here for review tag.

This was amazing! I immediately wanted to check out this story on seeing its about Narcissa, who is my favourite character by the way, and I loved it. Your characterisation of her is beautiful and spot on and I loved how you chose to write her addressing her thoughts to Dora about her sister and reflecting on everything.

The plot was superb and I really enjoyed this. Your imagery was astounding and I was completely hooked. There was this poetic flow about this whole piece that I loved so much. I think you've done complete justice to Narcissa's character. Your portrayal of her has me in awe =) The way you wrote about Andromeda was brilliant too.

The thing that made this story beyond amazing has to be your superb descriptions and imagery though. They were totally awesome!!

Great job!
I loved it!
10/10
Cheers
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hello!

Aw, thank you so much for all these amazing comments. I love Narcissa too, and giving her a little voice and depth in this story was a lot of fun, and maybe even redeemed her a little in my mind. I'm really honoured you think her characterization was well done and the perspective of the story!

I got really inspired while writing this piece and as a result it turned out very stream of consciousness and relying heavily on imagery and language, so I'm happy you appreciated that! I always thought I'd write a story about the Black sisters, though never thought it would take this angle, and I'm glad you thought the character came through.

Thank you so much for this incredible review! It really made my day! :D


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