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Review:Lady Asphodel says:
I just read your responses, particularly the one where you said that "you look forward to my reviews" - I'm glad you do - because I know how much a review can make someone's day. Plus - I mean like I said before - you deserve it. :)

I remember when you had requested the banner over at TDA and I had to click on it because I don't come across writers who write about Harry/Severus interaction and I was so glad that you did! Had I not seen you request the banner, I would not have known this story existence.

Anyways, so about the chapter!

I had absolute feels for this.. like I'm just lol dying from squeeing right now.

You portray Harry/Severus moments so wonderfully. You just don't know how irritated I get where when I read other Harry/Severus interaction... Harry is so needy or Severus immediately drops his guard (which I'll admit I was one of them too but I know better now.) Basically, I don't come across a lot of canon interactions with these two - and you just did it perfectly!

... Mmm... sorry for the long long jumble lol. :P

So moving on... I truly enjoyed that bit there where Severus guarded Harry from the attention and how he growled at the accounts of Harry's stories of how he received those injuries.

And of course, I enjoyed getting some more background on Alexis. You're really making her real where I feel like she was a part of J K Rowling's characters all along so kudos to you for that!


I can't wait for your next update and yes - let's hope that the NaNo doesn't get in the way! :D

Author's Response: Aww!! I do love you! :)

I must admit that I was terrified to write an OC so I love that she is being taken so well!

As for Snape & Harry...I know exactly what you are saying about reading such unrealistic & complete personality changes and how just weird that can be and so have tried soo hard to avoid doing that myself.

More fun to come! I have actually been using this story as my "break" from my NaNo story and should have my next chapter done & ready to submit by the time my Lily/James one-shot is validated! :)


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