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Review:Lululuna says:
What, Hugo and Ally have a kid together?! I'm not sure if that was hinted at before and I just missed it, but that just changes everything! I can't imagine what Hugo is going to do now, since it's not only his girlfriend but his son who stands to suffer.

I'm a little surprised Hugo isn't angrier about the whole situation: he seems very reconciled to the fact that he's a vampire and accepting that he can't be a parent to his son anymore. But then again, maybe it's just the calm before the storm.

Claudine is so sinister, and I'm worried about her plan to use Hugo for bait. It's too bad for Hugo that Lucy blurted out about Ally, though I guess it was to protect him and get him accepted into the coven. It's nice that he wanted to protect Lucy as well, but I wonder if that will change once he finds out what she was the one who turned him? I'm also excited to see how the rest of the Weasley clan will react to Hugo's disappearance, or if he'll even come clean about being a vampire.

Wait, isn't Valerie the name of the woman Jeremiah met in the last chapter in the 1700s? I'm so curious as to what she's doing working for the vampire slayers, and since she's a vampire, what her motives are and how she's managed to fool everyone for this long. This story just gets more and more tangled and exciting, and I know you just updated but I'm already excited for the next chapter! :D

Author's Response: Yep, Hugo and Ally have a son! Don't worry - it /was/ hinted at, but they were extremely subtle hints. Hugo is certainly in a quandary now, isn't he? :P

THE CALM BEFORE THE STORM. ♥ OMG, that describes him perfectly! Don't worry, drama will definitely come ;)

Claudine's plans are rather unorthodox, and occasionally fatal - you're right to be worried ;) Lucy did reveal Hugo's connection with Ally to save his life, although she didn't do very well with saving his humanity in the first place... heh. He'll definitely come clean about being a vampire; it's in future chapters but also mentioned in one of Bite Club's spin-offs, titled This Unravelling, which you can find on my Author's Page ;)

YES SHE IS THE SAME PERSON. Heh. You'll have to read on to find out more about Valerie ;)


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