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Review:toomanycurls says:
Could Anaxandra be more stubborn? :D I love that she's so upset by being handed off to someone else. I know she'll rationalize it as needing to pump draco for information - but I think there's more to it.

Your description of Harry is really well done. I love that she doesn't jump to 'omg, it's Harry Potter'. She notices what are his most prominent features (hair and glasses).

Aw, I can't believe Robards is publicly berating Draco. :( I get that he's in trouble but still - it doesn't seem fair.

It's sweet of Harry to give Anaxandra a few minutes to say goodbye. Her interpretation of strictness as 'asserting his dominance' was hilarious (to me). Now I have to prep myself for their goodbye.

*prepped*

I kind of want to see the scene in a movie. Her trying to say a heartfelt goodbye while stealing a file from his pile. Draco stubbornly denying he cares for her at all while being a prat. Their hug and the whole familiarity bit really made me all warm and fuzzy. aah, I have to know what the note from Draco said!!! That was the one of the saddest temporary goodbyes I've read. they should just snog already. :)

haha, of course Harry has a private floo network. He's Harry Potter after all. :D The Ginny/Anaxandra tension is brilliant. I could see Ginny just assuming every chick she meets will want Harry. The way you wrote up Tobin's information worked really well. It also read like a police file on someone.

Your scene with Harry et al discussing Anaxandra is quite brilliant. I love that Hermione is suspicious of her and wants to know why they're not following protocol. Ron's line about jealously not looking good on Ginny made me laugh - it sounds like something he'd say. And of course Ron would make a comment on her appearance. :D

I'm really excited to see what happens with Harry watching Anaxandra!! And how she gets back in touch with Draco.

-Rose

Author's Response: Haha thank you for all the sweet compliments :)

I didn't want Ginny to be so much jealous as she is more dominant. I've said this to another reviewer before, but I wanted it to be like when a new wolf enters a pack. The alpha male and female must assert themselves to make sure everything is in place :)

I'm very happy that you want to see that scene in a movie! I would as well to be honest lol it played out as such in my head.

And I also am very glad that you appreciate the goodbye. I was hoping someone would comment more on it, because I've been feeling very self conscious on it.

Thank you again for dropping by :) Always makes my day.

--Mon


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