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Review:Penelope Inkwell says:
AAAannd, there it is. Crush on the coach. Thats trouble brewing ahead, folks.

I like how practical Molly is, for a Weasley. Makes sense, her dad being Percy and all. So often I read stories about a Weasley-Potter who goes into pro Quidditch, but Ive never seen it from Molly. However, in some ways, she makes the most sense. If shes anything as driven and organized as her father (which in your story, she obviously is), then shes perfect for organized sport at a high level. And I like how we see hints of Percy in her (organizational skills, a bit bossy, a tendency to think she knows best), but shes still completely her own character. Now that the set up is all out there, Im really interested to see where this story is going to go!

--Penny

Author's Response: For sure!

I made Molly the only one to go pro cause in my version of the Weasleys, though the others have talent, Molly's the only one with the discipline and drive for the professional level. She's definitely got a lot of her father in her, though she's "cooler" like Uncle Bill and likes witty quips like her uncles rather than her dad. She definitely has a tendency to think she knows what's best for everyone.

Thank you so much for reviewing, I'm really glad you're enjoying the story!


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