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Review:patronus_charm says:
If there are any weird typos, this is a phone review.

I really love how you seamlessly made Ginny and co. adults you just made it so natural for them to have wine, children and be car sharing. It was so natural I almost needed to do a reality check but that was some really great characterisation on show there.

I liked how some things were comfortingly similar with Ginny's relationship with Molly, Fleur and Hermione still being the same. I know I'm sort of repeating what I said in the previous chapter but you've just managed to make all of the characters and their relationships evolved so naturally.

The way the moments of darkness creep up on me as well as Ginny work really well in creating an air of suspense and darkness. I had a feeling that it would happen because I'm beginning to pick up on the pattern of it happening when she's alone. Now I think about it it's almost strange that the others haven't really referenced to it yet considering it was such a major thing. Then again, it was never really mentioned in the books again which makes the whole idea of this story and her facing her fears even more fitting.

Great chapter, Amanda.

-Kiana

Author's Response: Hey Kiana!

It's great to hear that you liked my characterization of the Hogwarts era kids as adults. I wanted to show a typical, happy Weasley gathering--though obviously it didn't stay that way :( The little things, like Ginny's personal differences with Fleur, just don't matter as much in the grand scheme of all that Ginny is dealing with up inside her head.

It does tend to happen the most when she's alone. So far, she's had people around to help her out, but what if she didn't? I agree that it seemed weird for the books to barely mention her possession after the fact, and I've had fun creating my own head canon and exploring what might have been happening for Ginny all this time.

Thanks for another wonderful review :)

-Amanda


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