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Review:Loveinidleness says:
Fantastic chapter! Poor lamb she just can't catch a break can she?

So first - Astoria. I'm so glad to see her back in the story. You've written her really well because she does slightly annoy me and I do want to see Draco with Ana but at the same time I feel very sorry for Astoria. I would be interested to know more about draco's shift in feelings. How long has he been feeling this way? Has Astoria noticed anything iis wrong. You've created an interesting dynamic between those two and I can't wait to find out more.

Also just at the moment Draco begins to recognise his feelings, Ana is totally and rightly put off by the file, I can't wait to see how you reconcile this. You're building up such great tension.

And her brother is a bear? Her brother is alive? Her brother hit her? What's going on! Your story has a whole moves so gracefully through your tangled plot that a poor reader can help but be totally sucked in!

Author's Response: Hi! I'm really glad that you liked this chapter.

I never really thought about putting in how long Draco has been feeling that way I will definitely consider putting that in there.

Astoria will also make a new appearance soon! Ahhh I wish you could read more so I can see what you think of the newer chapters!!

And I know. I baby my readers about as much as I baby my poor characters lol. Hope to see you around soon and thank you for the feedback!

--Mon


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