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Review:milominderbinder says:
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Oh. My. God.

This was beautiful.

Your writing is incredible. I could totally feel every ounce of Narcissa's pain and her longing for lost family was so tangible it's actually put tears in my eyes. Even in just over 1000 words you managed to portray such a range of deep, explored emotions.

The imagery here was incredible. Even with relatively abstract description you really managed to paint a picture in my mind, a picture that showed Narcissa's surroundings as a kind of emotional reflection of herself.

I honestly don't know what else to say. This is the point of a review where I'd want to give constructive criticism but I'm not remotely qualified to criticise a single aspect of this! I'm sure not even an incredible professional author would have you change anything here, let alone a mediocre fanficcer like myself. You've honestly put me in a state of awe here.

Well done.

~Maia

Author's Response: Hello! :)

Wow, thank you so much for all these lovely compliments! This was a really exciting story for me to write so I'm glad you enjoyed it. I really wanted to have the emotion come across and it's wonderful to hear that was really effective.

Yes, it was quite abstract! I really like your comment about her surroundings being an emotional reflection: it fits what I was hoping to come across quite well.

You are so sweet! Thank you, these kind words mean so much. And you are definitely not mediocre! :)

Thanks so much for the review! :D


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