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Review:APerkins says:
Oh, they finally worked it out!
And I am so glad you killed Esme, thankyou.

That must have been hard, but is the type of tragedy the story needs. I liked her, I loved her and Harry together, but I think it was best for all concerned that she die. It gives us a "safe" heartbreak. sniff. Ill miss her though.
You have done the action scene really well. I thought it was great teh way you kept consistent with Hermione's injuries too - she doesnt have a miraculous recovery, she is obviously fighting.

What was Rory tennant thinking, throwing the sword into the lake?
Well, obviously he wasnt thinking, Tenebra was thinking for him. but what was she thinking?

Didnt she read Deathly Hallows? Doesn't she know that throwing that sword in a lake just guarantees it will be found by the good guys?

Silly evil main character... she should have shipped the sword to antartica. That would have made it difficult to get back. Not drwoned it in a lake with a Giant squid that helps put gryffindor students back in their boats.

Author's Response: Took them long enough to figure it out, didn't it? My characters don't tend to be quite as prescient as my readers. Then again, the story wouldn't be nearly as much fun if they were.

It wasn't an easy decision to kill off Esme. At lot of reviewers gave me a mountain of grief over that one. But there are reasons why it needed to happen. She and Harry were good together, but ultimately they were not meant to be. It also gives the readers one more reason to hate Lady Tenabra.

Lady Tenabra has her reasons for thinking that the sword needs to be eliminated. They might or might not be the correct reasons, mind you. More on this topic shortly...

Thanks for reading and reviewing!


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