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Review:Rumpelstiltskin says:
Everyone likes to update their stories at the same time, don't they? Only to send me into a frantic mess of notebook pages and flailing pens! :) I'm only kidding. I'm so happy to see another chapter!

Ah, the first conversation between Carolyn and George! This is fantastic. I hadn't thought about it, but the interaction borne from an outsider towards somebody like George is quite brilliant. Since neither knows anything of one another's suffering, you were able to create this beautiful scene. There are no sympathetic attachments between the two, allowing them to be brutally honest with one another (as it appears George is showing distaste in Carolyn for the time being).

I do hope you caught all of that. It seems I am rambling tonight.

I quite enjoy how Carolyn is attempting to prove others wrong concerting their opinions of her and Marielle (specifically stating a certain comment that she made about moving a certain object from a certain someone's...orifice). :) So funny.

I will be anticipating the next chapter and I have also been meaning to read "All Bets Are Off" as that seems right down my alley. I am nearly caught up on my reviews so I promise to get there soon!

Until next time
-Rumpel

Author's Response: Hi! And as happy as you are to see another chapter, I'm so happy you read and reviewed it!

And don't worry, I caught all of that. You like the brutally honest approach and you think that because they have no idea what the other has been through, this scene is really beautiful.

And yay! I'm glad you like Carolyn's story and all of her little quirks!

As for 'All Bets Are Off,' I would *love* if you read that! It's kind of my unplanned, go with the flow baby!

Hope to hear from you soon!

Lo:)


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