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Review:toomanycurls says:
Hi! Review tag!!!

Draco's interaction with Narcissa is really well done. His distance and her concern is believable and moving. I got a good sense of how Draco changed over the war and Voldemort's defeat.

Astoria seems awfully cold. I wonder how they ended up together. ^_^

I really like the flashback for Draco's Occlumency lesson with Bellatrix. It gives a good idea as to how he had to grow up fast.

It sounds like Hogwarts is quite overwhelming to Draco after the war. I like his hesitancy at seeing his friends. There was so much they all went through and they're trying to put back together a normal life.

Astoria seems quite haunting through this. She seems to really get past his wall without saying or doing much. This has been quite an interesting read!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review, toomanycurls! This story was really just an experiment on character and character interactions. Everything you have commented on was all purposefully written to explore the canon (and I guess, not so canon in Astoria's case) characters. I'm happy that you got all the right feelings and relationships that I was trying to touch on in this chapter - especially the Occulmency lesson. Draco and Bella's family relationship really interests me, and I'm hoping to talk a bit of it in this story.
Anyway, I'm so happy you found this interesting. Thank you so much again for the lovely review!
- Mahalia :)


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