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Review:randomwriter says:
Hi Maia! :)

First of all, I take my hat off to you! I saw the 'Lack a Letter Challenge' on the forums, but I couldn't bring myself to sign up. I mean, how did you write an entire story without using a letter.

I realize that the letter is 'P'. Well, I'm impressed :P And on top off that, you also attempted the 'Every Word Counts' challenge. (Or did you?...This fits the bill!) Another of those challenges that scare me. I've always wanted to try it, but I'm not sure how I'll manage to write a story using exactly and only 500 words.

This was brilliant. The way you started off completely drew me in. It was like you were trying to brainwash the reader in the manner that the necklace was attempting to brainwash Rose. I love how you've written this, especially since it's also for a Horror challenge too. Wow! Talk about challenging yourself on so many levels in just one story! I think you've done a great job. The feeling that this leaves you with (dazed and brainwashed) goes along the theme of horror.

Great job, Maia! I'm off to read your other story in a few minutes! I love your writing so much. I'm glad your page has a couple more from the last time I checked. (I re-read Soaring then :P) ...and meh. I don't care if it's creepy. You're a great writer!

Excellent story.
Love Adi :)

Author's Response: Aww, you're the sweetest! I've entered quite a few challenges recently so there'll definitely be more from me in the next few months, though this was definitely the most challenges I'll be combining into one story! I think the only way I managed to avoid a letter was because it was only 500 words, haha, otherwise a P word would have eventually been unavoidable!

I'm glad you thought the spookiness worked well :) I've never tried to write anything outright scary before so that definitely added yet another challenge to it for me! Thankfully I got inspired by a terrifying prompt or I don't think I would have been able to write something scary! Still, I adore Halloween, so it was worth getting out of my comfort zone for the spirit of the holiday ;)

I'm glad you liked it! And if you haven't read "winter, cry" yet, wow, prepare yourself for a very long and depressing oneshot! Hope you like it haha :)

~Maia < 3

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