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Review:toomanycurls says:
Imogen's musings at the beginning of the chapter are quite interesting. She sounds like someone who has been depraved of human interaction for a while (just that she jumps from topic to topic yet dwells on certain themes). Great job capturing how she moped. :)

I really like her bickering with Draco but his frustration seems to come rather fast. Is he worn out from a day of research? "I'm not the bad one here" makes it sound like she's the bad on. Ehh? And what was Imogen pondering after that statement?!?!

The paragraph about imagination being stronger than knowledge through her no longer fearing death was quite well done. I thought it was very poetic.

Oh man, her feeling after using the wand was quite powerful to read. ^_^

Aw, I really like the emotional turnaround Imogen has at the end. Once she realizes that Draco felt guilty during her imprisonment (or he might feel guilty about duping her now and lying to her about trying to help).

Really great chapter!

Author's Response: I'm very glad that you liked Imogen's chain of thoughts, I tried to make them as understandable and easy as possible since I do have a tendency to go off topic sometimes.

As for the bickering, let's be honest, Draco can be quite the little snot rag from time to time, more so in coming chapters. This is just the start! haha

Also, it's great to know that I did ok on the whole 'powerful' feeling after using the wand, especially for someone who has been deprived of magic for so long. I think Imogen views a wand as right of magic in a way.

Thank you so much for the lovely review!


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