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Review:milominderbinder says:
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Wow. From the very first line I could see this was going to be a very unique story, and I was definitely right! My very first thought was that I love how you've blended the kind of modern technology and very muggle ideas of airlock doors and security guards into this magical story. Mostly when people put technology into HP fic it comes off badly, with wizards using mobiles etc, but you've really hit the perfect balance of showing a magical person in muggle society.

I LOVE your characterisation of Rose. It's so incredibly intriguing! Again, the very first description of her told me so much - "Her legs were crossed, her hands politely folded in her lap, a practiced smile on her faceóher mannerisms resembled ones of a quaint grandmother." Given that we've kind of already established that she's a prisoner that description is especially powerful, juxtaposing her 'quaint' manner with her clearly high security imprisonment. It's a really intense the description and definitely makes me want to read on...

I love that we're seeing Rose at different points in her life, and it starts with her later in her life, because that's something that's pretty much never explored in fic, so that's just another thing that makes this super unique!

Your writing is really good, technically, and it flows really well, making this even more awesome to read.

To be honest, I just found this whole chapter incredibly interesting and I can't wait to see what happens! I know there's more chapters up and I'm going to read them as soon as I find time, because I can already tell this is going to be a very interesting story.

Well done!

~Maia

Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! I love that you find my story interesting and unique! I'm glad you like old Rose, she's very helpful with the story-narrative haha. Yes, there's definitely an element of mystery with why she's in the prison setting and her strange contradictory behavior. Though you are not in any way compelled, feel free to come back and read more! Thanks for the review!

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