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Review:randomwriter says:
Hello Sian! :)

I can't believe I haven't read this before! it's
fabulous! You plot is so original. I can't say
I've read anything from Molly's perspective
before! Not many people choose to write about
Molly, so I think this is a great choice on your
part! And Cyrus is brilliant too! I love that he's
a dragon handler. We don't see much of that in
fanfiction either, so you seem to have found
something incredibly unique to write about. I LOVE
it! :D

Molly's personality is excellent. She's very much
like Percy, but I think she's a lot less uptight.
She's really mature and responsible, and she takes
her work seriously. Which completely fits with my
head canon of her, so that was a bonus for me :P
You've written her really well, and while her
personality might seem boring to people around
her, I think she's going to be very interesting to
read about!

Cyrus. My god. I hate how easily I fall in love
with fanfiction characters, but... Well... He
seems so dreamy and perfect! I am gushing about
him now. It's like Sirius. I can imagine him being
effortlessly hot. As I mentioned, I think your
choice of profession for him is just as different
as unexplored as Molly's and I think the whole ex-
rock star past is going to fit in very well and
make this story so interesting! I was so surprised
that he didn't throw a fit when Molly didn't
change her position on the matter, because we
usually expect such characters to always get what
they want. But it was a fantastic touch!

I already love the way this is going. I can't wait
for more :D Sian, this is great!

Love
Adi :)

Author's Response: :O I can't believe that it's been over a month since you left this review! I'm so sorry... Real life has just been hectic - I'm responding to reviews as a reward for doing work at the moment!

So you already know that I've been hoping nobody would notice this story, but I'm glad that you enjoyed it! I think the fact that I hadn't read many stories about Molly II was why I wanted to write about her. By now you'll probably have seen how her character changes over the course of this story, but yes, you've got her exactly right in this review! She has elements of Percy, but isn't an exact copy of him. I'm glad that came across!

Yay, you like Cyrus! I'm sure there was some wish fulfillment going on here when I wrote this :P His character was so fun to write, and even though he is used to getting his own way, it's no necessarily something that he enjoys... which you've seen by now again!

Thank you for the lovely review, my dear!

Sian :)


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