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Review:shez says:
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This was an excellent, 'monstrous' one-shot. Your use of different elements (parenthesis, italics, disjointed prose and onomatopoeia) really makes for an entertaining read--I didn't know it was Tom/Minerva until the A/N. Some of the metaphors struck me funny (in a good way haha)--like the part about the apple (A/N explained the significance though). I don't know how to explain my feelings for this one-shot; it's very different from anything I've ever read. I had to read it twice to get it. I like how you portray Tom as a destructive, distorted entity (in so many different ways) and Minerva's inherent fascination with him, and further on his annoyance with her.

"She does not see.)

His mouth curls up around the edges, disgust."

Can't believe you wrote this in an hour. Impressive work!

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