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Review:shez says:
SO I've been taking French for five years and was thrilled to find how you've incorporated it into this fic. It gives the story a very poetic element, which in conjunction with your sparse prose, was refreshing to read. What I don't understand, however, is why you chose to make this dark angsty fic about Cho and Cedric. I personally don't see Cho pining for Cedric for 42 years (but to each his own, I suppose). Overall, the prose was excellent. The pairing, I question. I feel like it would be better suited for a darker, more tragic couple (Lucius and Narcissa? Bellatrix and herhusbandguywhat'shisface?).

Still, thanks for requesting this! It was lovely to read!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked the lyrics:) Yeah, you're right about her pining for that long for Cedric. I am planning on going back through and changing that last bit a little to keep it from being too.. whiny? (not sure what word to use). Those pairings would definitely work for a one-shot like this. I wanted to try writing from Cho's perspective, so I hope it was ok:)

Thanks for your review!
-LumosWealey


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