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Review:marauderfan says:
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Ooh, what a great Halloween piece. It's the type of story you read and then turn around uneasily because you feel like someone is behind you. :p Or maybe that's just me. But the voice! So creepy. And it's not the necklace, it's... something else. Something unknown. The vagueness really makes this so scary, because it could be anything!

Also, I have to say you did a really impressive job of telling the story and conveying that feeling in only 500 words - that is really impressive, and certainly something I've never been able to do.

Great job on this story, I loved it!

Author's Response: Yay, glad you liked it! Since I had such a short word limit I thought the way to make it creepiest was probably to make it super vague and weird, so I'm glad you agree!

Wow, it was so hard trying to only use 500 words! The shortest thing I've ever managed to write before this was about 2000 words... so this was definitely a challenge!

Thanks for the review :D

~Maia


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