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Review:marauderfan says:
Hello! Great chapter. I like seeing Eloise's interactions with Professor Sprout, and I love her friendship with Neville! I think it's quite realistic as well. I could totally see Neville as a Hufflepuff if he wasn't a Gryffindor, and he seems to get on really well with Eloise at least.

I really enjoy the two POV's. Cormac's is pretty funny. Eloise's introduction by way of embarrassing him, was great. Someone needs to take him down a notch anyway, and Eloise has a kind of quiet, unassuming way of doing exactly that.

Aw, thanks for the special mention in your author's note, you're so sweet! ♥ Lovely chapter and I'll be back to read the next whenever it's posted :)

Author's Response: Hi again!

I'm really happy you liked the interactions in this chapter! I think Eloise identifies with Neville because he's slightly excluded and Eloise feels like that too. Even though she has her friends, being HP does lead to a strong sense of isolation, and her relationship with Neville works because they respect the other's need to leave questions unanswered.

Cormac definitely needs to be taken down a notch! More of that will happen, fear not.

Thank you for such a lovely review, I'm really sorry I didn't answer earlier! ♥

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