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Review:Dawn says:
Well, I just read all of this and I really like it!

I like how Ella is strong and independent and a feminist and I love her relationship with Finn! Those two seem like siblings!

Chase... I don't know. Why is he so perfect? It just makes him seem like such a vanilla-ish character and I just can't shake off the feeling that he has some sketchy internal motives.

Dom and Finn belong together. Nuff said.

And I feel like she'll end up going with Albus because he's the only one who didn't pressure her to go with him at the beginning.

Overall, I think you have exceptional writing skills! Keep doin whatcha do!

P.S.-You run? Me too! I do long distance. You?

Author's Response: Awh thanks! All will be revealed re: Chase in the upcoming chapters, don't you worry. As for the rest of your comments... just wait and see! I'm working on the end of the chapter tonight and will hopefully queue it this weekend.
keep reading!
xoxo
Jilly
(ps- XC4LYFE. I've been running since I was seven, and just finished up my 9th season of xc! I love to run but hate the races.)


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