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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
Hello! If you don't remember who I am, that's okay! You entered my Regina Spektor challenge aaagggeesss ago, and I am just now getting around to giving you some prize reviews! This is the first of three, so let's begin, shall we? :)

So, I really love the way that this is written. It's almost mysterious, and very intriguing. Why is Hogwarts having "challenges?" Is it like a nicer version of the Triwizard Tournament, and only among Hogwarts students? Is it just for fun, or are there bigger things at stake? This whole idea just leaves me with a lot of questions, and I want some answers! How do the teams work? Are Rose and Albus on the same team, and if so, why were they against each other in the challenge that opened the story? Interesting things, indeed!

The only point of criticism that I can offer you is this: When things are plural, they do not get an apostrophe. Therefore, more than one Gryffindor="Gryffindors," not "Gryffindor's." You did that a couple of times, and I can totally understand--honest mistake! However, that was the only mistake I found.

The other criticism that I have for you is this: WHY isn't this a novel already?! I just feel like it ended so abruptly, and there DEFINITELY needs to be a lot more chapters with new challenges, characters, and maybe an explanation for what the challenges actually are. When you find the time, could you please, PLEASE write some more of this? And if you do, could you please, PLEASE message me on the forums so that I can read it?

You're awesome for writing this story, even though it's so short and needs to be much longer!


Author's Response: Thanks for getting to this!

I'll be honest: this one-shot was a huge experiment for me. It was for a challenge and I'm glad I did it.

Thanks for all of you input, especially about the Gryffindors/Gryffindor's thing. I have such trouble with that!

I also didn't think that anyone would want this to be expanded. I don't know if I have time right now to continue the story, and I might even delete this.

Thanks for your helpful tips anyway :)

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