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Review:APerkins says:
Ok so I love the way you have the dialogue moving things along. I love that its not just filler talk to show relationships, u use it to convey plot points. I tyink the fact that u keep the plot moving with just enough description to set the scene is well balanced and enjoyable to read.
Do u have anything of ur own published?

How do I get my hands on it?

The paragraph where harry is lying awake watching reflected sliver of moon is just excellent. Sums up everything. That entire section on harry's internal reflection is just brilliant!


I dont think you do tenabra during the ministry announcement as well, but im not sure why? I think her thoughts are less organised? Or perhaps it is the speech? Im sorry, not helpful, but percy n secretary was great.

Also I love molly a lioness? Is that canon? I must have missed it if it was, but if not, its inspired!

Author's Response: Good morning! Well, morning where I am, anyway.

I love it when I can make use of dialog to push the plot of a story. It feels so much more natural than having the omniscient narrator do it.

I do not have any original work published outside of HPFF. It isn't that I wouldn't like to, that's just not how life has turned out.

Harry's internal debates are always a good way to break down what "the good side" knows, I think. Plus I like writing him.

One thing about Tenabra is that I'm always walking kind of a tricky line with her. Put too much into her thoughts and it will be pretty obvious who she really is. It's a hard balance to hit.

Molly never casts a patronus in the books, but I thought a lioness was just about perfect for her. :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!


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