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Review:Cannons says:
Hey, here with your requested review!

Can I just say that you used so little words but made each word mean so much, it was really powerful.

I liked the idea of Sirius running away and have never actually read something that shows how he ran away so this was cool.

I think it would be just like Sirius to be interested and be intrigued as to what was in there. 'curiosity kills the cat' though and that was scary, and it turned out to be true as well in the end! It was a boggart right?

you included a lot of description in this and it makes it seem so much more real.

what's QTR btw? I'm a noob :(

my only CC is that it was to short :o

Cannons

Author's Response: Hello, thanks for coming by!

I'm glad you liked my word choice and felt like the scene with the writing desk was effective. According to canon it is a Boggart (the same one Molly Weasley ran into during an Order meeting at Grimmauld Place), but I like to think that maybe something even more sinister lurks in that locked drawer...

Hah, QTR is something exclusive to the Ravenclaw Common Room. You wouldn't be familiar with it unless you were a 'Claw.

Well, the piece could only be 500 words according to the competition rules :)

Thanks for your kind review!

-Amanda


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