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Review:APerkins says:
Awww trust Mel to be confident enough to joke about where she got her troll hat (and continue to wear the thing!)
Quick aside, Apologies for the review on the other story - it was even more full of typos than usual. I wrote it on my phone with predictive text changing all my words. Never again!

oooh Hector and Althea? that'd be nice, Hectors a nice guy. Good to see that vanessa cow making a reappearance :) she is good value. I hope she turns out to be a real nasty person, spying for bulgaria or something!
And I am kinda glad Mandy is aware of Sirius and not comfortable with what she feels about it atm.
im still feeling a little like these are filler/fluff chapters and we only very occasionally get hints as to what the major conflic in the plot is. You keep telling me that is the point, and i am enjoying the ride... but.

lol. just ignore me, this is a good lesson in patience!
i think you do the action/dialoge balance well, particularly with the broomstick section. that was well written :)

love it !

nauseous? a long cold drink? a bloodsicle? ice in your veins?
Cold hearted blood sucker?
Frosty the pathologist?
cryogenically frozen?
exsanguinated in cold-blood?

yeah, Im giving up :P

Author's Response: No worries! I figured it might have been phone predictive text, lol. No one can escape the curse of autocorrect. ;)

Oh, I wish I'd made Vanessa a Bulgarian spy, that'd be awesome! I'm enjoying your predictions. :p

Ahaha.. you are right, this chapter IS 100% filler. Sorry. That's to make up for the following one though... which will be up soon.

I had completely forgot I put that riddle in there, and at first I was like "what is this list?" The answer is. . . . FROSTBITE!! :P But your answers are pretty amusing too, I liked them.

Thanks so much for your review!!

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