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Review:Rumpelstiltskin says:
So I have attempted to give myself some time to allow this story to sink in. That is, because I was hoping to offer you something in a review that was not just squee filled ravings. This entire trilogy was just too beautiful so that is obviously not going to happen. Although, perhaps now I can formulate some proper sentences that do not solely consist of "oh my god!" :)

Just for the record though, OH MY GOD!

I love your characterization of many of the people in your story. THis is especially true regarding Beth. She's unique, dynamic, round, interesting to read about, and (somebody give the girl an award) in love with Severus Snape!

Speaking of Severus, not only have you done a brilliant job concerning his character development but you made this wondrous little plot about his memory of Beth being eradicated. I love the originality and the intriguing little twists it has generated throughout.

I would also like to remark on the way you have captured the Marauders: genius, I say! They have to be some of the best represented Marauders that I have ever had the pleasure of reading. James as a father is too cute, and I adore his interactions with Lily and Beth. Of course, then there was the anticipation and anxiety surrounding that impending October night, which never ceased giving me chills.

I found myself astoundingly captivated as I read each positively gripping chapter, hoping that Severus would eventually come to remember Beth. Every time his thoughts even moved vaguely towards her I became almost uncontrollably excited.

By the time chapter 23 rolled around I found myself attempting to cheer Beth and Severus on from my computer screen like a complete lunatic. That was a particularly odd situation to talk myself out of when my fiance walked in on my pathetic attempts of communication. Though it did not stop my obsessive chanting.


Talk about being at the edge of one's seat! And then the end of the chapter...oh my god.

Right, I am supposed to be formulating sentences so...moving on.

Back to the October occurrences, oh dear lord! I knew what was going to happen (what HAD to happen) and I had braced myself for it but it still broke my heart! :( It is okay, though, as I am a big girl and I can deal with this...probably.

I also loved the aftermath of the entire situation. People's emotions were running high and the suspicions and blames were turning everybody against one another. It was perfect, really.

Everything was so tragic and so perfect and then HOLY COW MARRIED?! I think I cried from pure delight! Hooray!! Everything was perfect.

I cannot believe that it is really over! All I can say is that I will read this over and over and...

Long live Sneth!


Author's Response: Holy cow married! It truly means so much to me that you made it to the end of this series -- it's so near to my heart that anyone who reads all three books has an endless supply of brownie points from me. ♥

Seriously, thanks so much. :) I hope that someday you do come back and read this review response, even though it's very late, because I don't want you to think I don't care about your kindness and enthusiasm. At this point in my life, when my fan fiction is almost nonexistent and my original writing has hit a slump, I appreciate it more than ever.

Truly, thank you for reviewing!

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