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Review:Lululuna says:
Hi! I'm so sorry, it's been forever since I left you a review on your brilliant story, RL has been leading me all over the place! :) But I'm all caught up now and as amazed as ever by how incredibly canon and real and unique and entertaining and heart-warming this story is.

I love how you balance the perspectives of all the characters, and how intricate all their lives are. I know it wasn't really relevant in this chapter, but I was awed by the genius of Peter being caught by poor instable Marlene, by Remus standing up for Sirius at the trial, by Tonks and Remus not admitting their love for each other though it's painfully obvious to all of us, by poor Florence and her troubles, and by the way all these stories are so seamlessly knit together.

Now, this chapter itself was great. I liked seeing Charlie and Tom again (in my mind Tom is now one of Charlie's friends who comes to pick up Norbert, haha). Harry's school was so well-written and a really interesting new plot arch. I love how his last name is Evans, how he told the class he got a dog, how Sirius was so nervous about dropping him off, and especially how Hermione makes an appearance! I never would have guessed that, but she was perfectly in character, what with worrying about the test and shushing them in the library and nervously hoping Harry might want to be her friend, it's exactly how she was in Philosopher's Stone and you gave her such depth. Blaise I'm not so sure about: I wonder if he's Blaise Zabini? If so, I'm guessing maybe he grew up with his Muggle dad and only finds out he's a wizard and the son of that "famously beautiful witch" we hear about in canon once he gets his letter. But I'm not sure, there could be something suspicious going on! :)

This was a really great chapter, and congratulations on hitting 65 chapters! That is really something to be proud of, and as for me I hope you make it to 200, as I will never get enough of this story. :)

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