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Review:Cannons says:
hey, here with your requested review :)

I really enjoyed this chapter, I though that the picture was such a clever way of showing the reader how things will never be quite the same for her now that she has been bitten.

I really do not like her boss, what an idiot, she seems rather indifferent to the fact that her employee has been bitten on a 'mission'( couldn't think of the right word!) set by her. Much more focused on making the deadline. She didn't seem that shocked either so maybe she even asked a werewolf to bite her, so they could get that personal touch? After all why would one be standing right outside her front door..but then again they're not in control of themselves are they so maybe not.. :L

One bit that I thought you might change is ' give you 48 hours.' so you spell it out, rather then just putting the numbers.

I liked the bit where you showed her looking at her bite in the mirror and the comments about her being tainted.

Cannons

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reading and reviewing.

I am pleased you liked the way I showed how life won't be the same for Dom anymore.

Her boss is not a very likeable character yeah. You'll see about what she did and didn't do ;)

Thanks for pointing that bit out. I'll edit it soon =)

I am glad you liked the scene in front of the mirror too.

Thanks!


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