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Review:marauderfan says:
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I read the first chapter of this ages ago, and I'm really not sure how it took m so long to get around to reading the second one because this is a brilliant fic. Ellie's sarcasm and witty comments about life are so great. And alongside the excellent humour, there's a plot that seems like it will go great places. I love her ghost-seeing ability, it's really cool! (though she probably gets tired of it sometimes. I imagine)

What a strange encounter with Regulus, haha! I like the way you wrote him though - a little like Sirius, but not quite - which is really a lot how I pictured him. Except that he's way more into technology... and I LOVE that he watches Doctor Who :p

I liked the scene with Ginny at the end too, it was so sweet!

There was a small typo I noticed, it says "illicit" in one place where I think you meant "elicit".

)By the way, I'm sorry if there are typos in this review. I'm sitting in the dark and can't actually see the keyboard.)

Awesome chapter and I will definitely be back tp read more!

Author's Response: Hello!

Haha, don't worry about the typos - I'm typing this in the dark, so I can't guarantee much better!

I'm glad you like Ellie! She's a lot of fun to write, especially her sarcasm, and she does have a different way of looking at things, which can be interesting.

Regulus is the best to write. He can be quite difficult at times, but it is well worth the effort!

I'm glad you enjoyed the scene with Ginny. I've never written a something with that sort of emotional resonance, so I was worried about conveying the sentiments correctly.

Thanks for pointing that one out! They mean such different things - I guess it's time for an edit!

Thank you so much for the wonderful review!


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