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Review:MissMdsty says:
Hey there! I came back for some Autumn/Louis goodies and I was not disappointed. But one thing at a time.

I loved how much detail the girls put into planning the birthday party. It's so amazing to see the kind of friendship these girls have. And having Dom and Roxanne as the Weasleys who are part of it is more amazing, because I feel like they get somewhat overlooked in NextGen stories. The stories about them growing up and the trouble they made. If I were their parents I'd always have some Veritaserum at hand to get the truth out of them. Or maybe Polyjuice Potions to infiltrate enemy ranks... Yeah that's me channeling my inner RtF feels.

I liked the bit about them saying they have super human hearing abilities, as opposed to just showing the others the map. It's things like these, where we know but the character doesn't that I really like. Although, Autumn should suspect something is up, history has shown us that Filch can be avoided only by map, cloak or Felix Felicis.

And Autumn and Louis oh the shippyness. Yes, I invented a word. No, I am not sorry, because you made me search for "Hirrandipopping" and I sat there in shame as all search results lead to your story. I feel like just slipping them some Amortentia or something and getting this show on the road. The romantic tension between them is something you can cut with a knife. Maybe don't give them Amortentia, give them Kissing Concoction. Knowing these characters though, they'd probably end up mixing Pepper Up Potion or something like it by accident, so scrap that whole plan.

I really liked getting back into the atmosphere of the girls' life at Hogwarts and their wacky adventures and I will proceed to poke you from time to time to update! *pokes*

Great chapter lovely! :)

Ral

Author's Response: RAL!

Rereading this review, I sat here blinking for about a minute before remembering the context in which it was written. ;)

The girls' friendship makes me so happy. I write their interactions with a huge, goofy smile every time. Roxanne and Dom do get overlooked most of the time, I agree -- it's part of the reason I chose to write about them (and also because I felt writing an original take on Rose would be difficult and I was lazy).

Autumn will find out about the map and cloak eventually! I just feel like the way everyone in Next Gen stories knows about them is odd and that Harry wouldn't want the entire world knowing.

Hahaha, I'm not sorry you had to google hirrandipopping! All credit goes to Sophie. And I'll be stealing shipyness, it looks funky. THERE WILL BE MORE SHIPPYNESS TO COME.

*pokes back*

Thank you darling! ♥


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