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Review:Cannons says:
Hi, just read on as this chapter wasn't too long.

Before I forget I noticed a little error that I thought I'd point out 'needed to be packED'

I was under the impression that they were going to go to Hogwarts and check the security and then come back and have another discussion. I thought Royals would always take a long time over decisions but these Royals seem to get things done quickly!

This was a nice chapter to link everything together I think it maybe have been a little short but as they say 'short and sweet' ( I think they do...) and it was enjoyable.

That was a great twist with her condition I totally didn't see that coming.

Cannons

Author's Response: Hello!

Well yay! Two reviews instead of one! Always appreciated!

The error I will fix ASAIDR (as soon as I'm done responding).

As for the decision, Marielle's birthday is near the end of August, so they really didn't have time to go to Hogwarts and come back. Also, Carolyn is extremely hot-headed, so she doesn't want her father to ruin this in any way, and she's known to make extremely rash decisions.

That said, I will go over this with a fine-toothed comb and try and sort that confusion out.

And her condition actually becomes a part of the story later on, but yay! Plot twist!

Thanks so much for this! It was really helpful and just made my day!

Lo:)


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