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Review:Cannons says:
I'm here with your requested review, so hey!

Awhh Marielle is soo sweet and I'm so happy she got to make her own decision! I'm guessing this was quite an important chapter in your story and it read quite well.

I can sort of see the direction this is going, and it looks quite exciting, personally I can't wait until she meets George. I'm sure you will do a great job when we get there.

I think the length of this chapter and the next one maybe be a little short but I understand that you are trying to build it up nicely.

Overall a good job and you are dragging me in and it seems I don't really have a choice in the mater!

Nice chapter :)

Author's Response: Hello!

Yes, it was very important to the story, I really wanted Marielle (and she is darling, isn't she?) to start making decisions that she never had the chance to make beforehand.

And George? I don't know if I've told you, but he's extremely prejudiced and neither Carolyn nor George especially like each other to start (*spoilers!).

The length is a little fluctuatey, I know. I would put chapters together, but I try and keep one scene the entire chapter for some unknown reason (I honestly have no clue why...).

And I'm dragging you into this? Yay!... As long as you're not kicking or screaming, though.

Thank you for your time, this was really appreciated!


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