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Review:Patrick. says:
So, I thought I should review seeing as how I haven't done so as yet. My god this chapter, I can really understand both Sirius and Gemma's point of view on the whole issues, curse being a hufflepuff! I'm too empathetic for my own good. But honestly, that ending. You could feel Gemma's heart breaking as you read that. Which comes back to your fantastic writing ability,and your ability to characterise your characters so well. I'm seriously interested to see how you resolve this conflict or leave it, I wonder what Gio has to say about this development. Anyway, thanks for writing this for us. Is quite honestly one of the best fan fictions I've ever discovered, but take your time crafting the next chapter. I'd rather a better chapter which took slightly longer to write, than a rubbishy one quickly. Oh and you do have a life as well aha. Have a fantastic couple of weeks until the next chapter is published. Good luck with your endeavours and all that. And thank you again.

Patrick.

Author's Response: Well Patrick, you are talking to a very empathetic Hufflepuff here, so you're in good company ;)

I'm happy you can see both sides of the story - because it's not easy being around someone who's as crazy as Gemma, but it's also not a walk in the park to keep up with Sirius' separation anxiety. So they both are at fault in their own weird way and as James said, something had to change between them. There are about 10 chapters left and I've already planned a sequel, so things will be resolved, I just can't tell you when ;)

I plan to start writing the next chapter tomorrow so hopefully it will be done by the end of the week. And THANK YOU for your lovely review, I really love it when I get feedback, but I love it even more when I hear from new people XD

Carly


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