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Review:PitchBlue says:
Finally I've found the time to review! Seriously uni life has been CRAZY. I had already read the chapter (how could I not?) but I was drowning in work. Anyway, I'm here at last!

DUDE THIS CHAPTER IT'S BRILLIANT BUT ALL THE FEELS MAN! First, everything starts out nicely, with a bit of an edge about the whole Siriu-is-angry thing. I really liked the conversation between Aeryn and Peter, especially this sentence I thought told so much by saying so little:

"...showing that she had been listening, even if she wasnít directly paying attention to him."

I don't know, I just felt like it was so important. I mean, she's not ignoring him or being very distant, because that wouldn't be Aeryn, but I could imagine her perfectly like that.

I'm really glad you included some Jily because I could use some 'ahw' moments in this chapter! They're so adorable.

AND THEN THE REMUS/MARIANNE PART (what would be a good name? Remianne? Idk) Man could it be any more hotter? I think I need a cold shower...

It doesn't stop there though! NOOO SIRIUS! Your wrote it so believable. I thought it was really good that you didn't write about how he and the girl (forgot her name) hooked up, instead focusing on his train of thought and Gemma's reaction. But oh god all the feels... I'm curious how you're going to continue their storyline!

Author's Response: :D

I tried to warn everyone about the feels, I really did ... but sadly, they are going to keep coming, right up until the end. You know some of the subplots from our conversations but I have a feeling you will really hate me during the next group chapter ;)

I'm glad you're picking up on the Aeryn/Peter situation ... because I know their subplot isn't very interesting, but as you know, things are going to get a little more exciting for them. All in due time XD

I'm glad you like the Jily part too! I hope everyone figured out James' costume (I tried to leave a ton of hints without ever saying it), because I personally thought their little role play was hilarious. And this chapter was pretty serious, so I had to put some comedy in there.

I've made a couple combinations - Remianne, Marius, etc - but yeah, that's probably the best ship name for them. That was a fun/tragic scene to write because it was hilarious to think like a teenage, sex crazed boy but a little sad, since as you know, that scene was quite personal for me.

I felt the chapter wouldn't have flowed correctly if I started with Sirius cheating with Rose. And yeah, I think it highlights all the feels more this way. You'll see how things go, but remember, there will be a sequel ;)

Thanks for the review, girl XD


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