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Review:Rumpelstiltskin says:
I have to say, beginning the enrollment at nine is spot on for the time. It seems as though many age-related stipulations were much lower many years ago than they are present day.

Ah, lovely, the founder's children!

I know I should trust the narrator, but I sense a serious plot twist brewing! Something is going to happen with Salazar, isn't it? The anticipation is killing me!

Right, now that that has been said...

I love that Edith and Rhys are troublemakers! Every good story needs one or two mischievous members to stir up the pot a bit! This chapter is a perfect introduction to these character!

Creaothceann is a genius idea, by the way. I'm guessing it may just be the very crude and primitive beginnings of Quiddich?

I can't believe I have to wait to read more! I suppose I'm selfish like that :). At any rate, I will be waiting!

-Rumpel

Author's Response: Oh, good! That's wonderful to hear that it seems to fit with the time.

That's the thing with four narrators... they don't all agree, or see the same things ;) You'll get Salazar's POV again in the next chapter, though!

Haha, I'm glad you like Edith and Rhys! All the kids are troublemakers really - I think with a bunch of young kids whose parents are the founders of the school, they'd think they can get away with a lot!

Creaothceann is pretty ridiculous, right? I didn't actually come up with that myself - it's mentioned in JKR's book Quidditch Through the Ages! (So yes, I think it's one of the precursors to Quidditch)

Thank you so much for all your wonderful reviews! To be honest, I hadn't thought about this story for a while (these chapters had been written for months) but I've reached the end of my finished chapters so now I'm inspired again, and I'm going to start working on the new chapter ASAP! :)


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