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Review:Rumpelstiltskin says:
Awe! Even a little love story woven in! An author after my own heart, truly. I loved Salazar and Maeve at the beginning, especially since she was a muggle. I knew it held that beautifully tragic potential. So when the hammer fell, I was (almost) expecting it. The blow came in pretty hard though. Oh, poor Salazar! He's so misunderstood with his speaking to snakes and such. And that *taking a deep breath* bad person went and got married! She's ruined him! I must get off this topic before I become too excited and start ranting :). But thank you for creating a character whom I will eternally hate! Salazar should feed her to his basilisk...

Right, moving on.

Have I mentioned before how much I love that you are showing the development of the Hogwarts schooling structure. I I have, I hope that there is no harm in reiterating. Which bring me to the birth of Defense Against the Dark Arts, brilliant Salazar! I enjoyed that you used his character in the idea of its creation with his well-rounded argument of "Knowing the Dark Arts helps with Defense against it." Silly other founders with their disagreeing and whatnot!

Right then...off to the next chapter!

-Rumpel

Author's Response: Hi again! ♥ I'm glad you like the little side plot of Salazar and Maeve. "Beautifully tragic potential" - that's a great way to phrase it, I like that! Poor Salazar indeed. Slytherin never struck me as the type to forgive easily (or at all, I suppose) so yeah, Maeve didn't leave him in a good place. :( Haha, feel free to eternally hate her!

Thank you so much - I'm really glad you are enjoying the journey of the development of Hogwarts. I figured it had to have changed a bit over 1000 years, so it functioned a bit less smoothly then, haha. And yes, I think Salazar would have had sound reasons for teaching the Dark Arts - his friendship with Godric would make no sense if he were super into Dark magic just for the fun of it!

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! You are the best! ♡


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