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Review:Pheonix Potioneer says:
The eagle's question? Um, I didn't think there was anything suspicious, it was just a riddle. Now you're making me think. Is something going to happen at Honeydukes?

Dora... I think there is always the possibility that she's planning something, but I most likely agree with Ramsus, that she's just trying to wind Rose up.

I honestly cannot see the A.W.L. spilling secrets to a 12-year old girl. They are obviously more of the old-fashioned type in their beliefs if they hate werewolves so, which probably means they would think that children are certainly not able to do anything important. Dora might be able to pick up things, especially if her father is in the A.W.L. or something, but she most likely will not know a lot. If her hint about the next full moon in genuine, I'm sure they just heard it breifly mentioned. I think Dora might be acting like she knows a lot, and that what she revealed to Rose might be all she knows. I just can't see the A.W.L. telling Dora information.

Rose at least has some sense. She is trying to keep out of trouble, and not duel Dora. That's smart of her.

Your chapter title is okay. I think I've mentioned before how terrible I am at titles, so I don't have suggestions. "Tensions Remain" suits the chapter pretty well.

I rather like your Scorpius. He's not Albus's best friend, but he's not their enemy either. I'm actually surprised how much Scorpius was willing to tell Rose about the whole A.W.L. affair. I thought he wouldn't tell her anything, but he was pretty open about his opinion.

Author's Response: Ha ha, I'll allay your fears and assure you that no, the riddle was just a riddle. I just asked because I'm rapidly running out of ideas for questions and was wondering if Honeydukes was a weird thing for a presumably 1,000 year old brass knocker to ask about. *laughs*

And *grins*, there's a lot of logic in what you say. Dora rather likes worrying people, with the graffiti and all. She may know something though, but you're right in that she would hardly have details. Unless, of course, somebody thought she'd be useful... I'll just leave that thought there.

Yeah, I'm trying to keep my version of Scorpius different from others I've read about and it's not easy, because he's been interpreted a number of ways.

Glad you think the title is OK. I'm not great with titles either.


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