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Review:Rumpelstiltskin says:
So this was entertaining.

I found it humorous but still well grounded. I may have died laughing just a bit when Lucinda sets Lily up with Jams for Transfiguration revisions :). Also, I enjoyed Lucinda's cheeky remark near the end, "I don't know what you plan to do in a revision session..."

You characterization is lovely and I am enjoying the interactions between the characters that I've seen so far.

I do apologize for not having too much to say in this review. It is still so early in the story but I am enjoying myself very much! I can't wait to read more!

-Rumpel

Author's Response: Hi Rumpel! It was a lovely surprise to log on to see this review :) Thank you!

I'm glad you found it humorous :) I didn't originally plan for this to be humorous (my attempts at humour are not very good!!) but it just seemed to write itself with a hint of humour. I'm so happy that you enjoyed Lucinda's cheeky remark :)

It's really good to hear that you found the characterisation lovely and that you enjoyed the interactions. I really enjoyed writing the banter between the four girls, especially Lily and Lucinda :)

Agh, please please do not apologise!! This unexpected review really made me really happy, so thank you!! Just hearing that you are enjoying it and look forward to reading more is fantastic and I really appreciate you leaving the review to let me know :-D

Haronione ♥


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