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Review:maraudertimes says:
I'm here with your requested review!

This is very intense!

Your descriptions are very well thought out and all the details are very precise.

The POV was a little scattered, but I realize that it's part of your story! :)

The tone is very creepy, mysterious, and scary, but overall, very intriguing!

Now some CCs:

When you were trying to describe how long it took for the old woman to reply, maybe just put why she was taking so long to do so? Also, stretch that part out because it's supposed to take a while. Describe menial things like the way the woman saw Teddy, the scenery behind him, etc. Anything to make that time stretch out for the readers.

I would have liked to know what the two dead people were going to add to the story. And why Maggie Bagshot is so strangely knowledgeable about those things.

But, with all that said and done, this is really cool and interesting and I hope you keep writing this. I really enjoyed it! :)

Lo :)

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