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Review:MadiMalfoy says:
Hi again! Don't ever worry about coming back chapter after chapter--it's not a big deal unless someone starts to complain about someone taking a spot all the time because their novel has like 30 chapters and I'm only halfway or something like that. :)

Anyway, I think this chapter was great! You introduced us to a new character that will play a slightly major role and then your main OC Sadie, who I can already tell will have some rather interesting background to be told in the future!

The way you wrote Minerva showed the readers a side we aren't really used to seeing--she's relaxed and not uptight and professor-like. It's actually quite funny that she has this best friend who's always doing something odd and out of the ordinary. It's ironic because Minerva is always so polished and clean and precise whereas Ophelia turns teenage girls into rubber chickens and has knitting needles as pets.

Overall, this was a great introductory chapter for your two OC's and I'm excited to see more of them! :)
~MadiMalfoy x

Author's Response: Whew! Thank you! I do worry about making people keep reading stuff if they aren't enjoying it. Everyone here is so nice; I'm not sure they would tell me if they didn't like the story, LOL.

And I'm sorry it has taken me so long to reply to this review. Real life the last month has been SO crazy as we've been putting on our musical at the school I teach at.

I'm very glad you liked the chapter! And that you like Sadie so far. That is always nice in a story where the character is going to take a mail role. :)

I really wanted to show Minerva with a different side, but still keep her the Minerva we love from the books. I hope I was able to do that a little bit. And yes, it was fun to think of her having a friend who was a little off the wall. But, then again, she puts up with Dumbledore so she's kind of experienced.

Hehehehe. Glad you liked the rubber chicken and knitting needles.

Thanks so much for reading and for such a fun review! Now that I'm getting caught back up on things, I will keep an eye out on your review thread and try to re-request. I'd love to know what you think of later chapters.


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