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Review:ohmymerlin says:
Hello! I'VE FINALLY CAUGHT UP!

Okay, this chapter was incredible! I loved Cara's necklace plot-twist thingy, it's really cool and original!

BUT I'M SO CONFUSED AS TO WHY SHE'S ALIVE AND NOT TELLING DANNY HE'S ABSOLUTELY MISERABLE WHY WON'T SHE JUST TELL HIM FHBJNFJDBGK

Also, I feel like Georgiana's uncle (by the way, I love the name Georgiana, it sounds so regal and elegant!) is maybe Blaise or something? I'm just trying to think of HP characters who agreed with the Pureblood ideals. I mean, there's Goyle as well but I can't really see him being so... manipulative and clever, as mean as that sounds! :p

Or there's Theodore Nott but for some reason he's a real softie in my head! :p It may be different for you, though, haha!

Or there's also Zacharias Smith who was the baddie in a different novel, 'The Mysterious Case of the Twin Wands'. It's a brilliant read if you haven't read it already!

And Albus needs to hurry up and talk to Rose! They're family! Family is the most important thing in the world!

But I also think Rose should be the bigger person and talk to her family. She clearly needs their help!

Anyway, this was another brilliant chapter! I love the suspense and mystery you create, it's really keeping me on the edge of my seat! (Metaphorically, I'm actually in my bed whenever I read fanfiction, haha!)

10/10 :)

- Kayla :)

Author's Response: Again, thank you so much for reviewing! I'm glad that you liked the minor plot twist with Cara's necklace! It took me ages to think it up. Cara not telling Danny will be a big theme that's forthcoming. It'll be explained by the (eventual) reveal of who Georgiana's uncle is. I like your guesses though! (:

Can't you totally see Rose being stubborn and not wanting to give in first? I can also see Albus being extremely stubborn, but the next update (which will be uploaded sometime before the end of this month xD) will explain more about their falling out.

Thank you SO much for reading and reviewing! (:


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