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Review:maraudertimes says:
Hey, it's maruadertimes here with your requested review!

Okay so first, this is ah-mah-zii-ng! (read that in a horrible french accent, will you?)

The characters are really believable. I love Ellie and her sarcastic nature and her eye rolls! Ah, she's hilarious! Rose is a Ravenclaw? Also very believable, what with her mother being Hermione. Albus cracks me up. And so does Chris. The whole juice fiasco? Priceless. You've set their back stories up very well too.

Everything was very clear and precise, although a little more description couldn't hurt (although it really doesn't matter since it was amazingly well done anyways).

I don't have many CCs. Actually, I just have one. I don't really think that the word 'ain't' is such a good one to use here. That's just my opinion though, so feel free to disregard this :)

All in all, amazing chapter. I really liked it and I'm super excited to read more, so please, please, feel free to re-request this.

MT :D

Author's Response: Hello!

As ordered, I read that in a French accent, so merci very much!

It's great that you love Ellie. I wanted her to be likeable, even though she can be a little rude and antisocial. And it's great that you enjoyed all the other characters, too!

I've struggled with the use of the word ain't. I personally don't like the word, but there are moments of deep confusion...

Thanks so much for this!


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