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Review:bellatrixlestrange123 says:
Hey there! I'm here for our review swap!

Okay so I liked this a lot! the mood was great from the start, very uplifting and relaxing. I liked the way it was kind of abstract too and your way of portraying the relationship of two best friends was very good!
I like the way you write Becky, very detailed descriptions of her thoughts and the way she is feeling, especially after her dream towards the end.

With most reviews come a teeny weeny bit of criticism as well (just a small bit). Firstly, there was just some minor tense problems at the start: You started off in the third person 'Rebecca was sitting in front of her desk' but then soon after switched to the first person for the rest of the chapter. Don't worry, I make silly mistakes like that al of the time! Secondly, this isn't criticism but I think your chapter would flow better if you rearrange some of your paragraphs or add some more things to them so they are more embedded within each other and easier to read.

Overall, this was a very nice fic to read! Very refreashing so well done and good luck with this story!

Bella :)

Author's Response: Hi :-)
Thanks for the rewview. I'm glad you liked it overall.
Arent we all here for the critism? Isn't it why we crave reviews? I'm always happy and needy for some feedback, as I am not a native speaker, so anything is always welcome =) so Thanks!

Love,
T.


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